All Comments on 'A Ta'Narian Christmas'

I haven't read it yet,, I just wanna be the first who thank you for submit this story..

It's like an early christmas gift to me :) thx nmt

It´s greate to read about the ones more... hope you post more soon and happy hollidays..

Hehe very sweeet. Love the family reunification... especially during times like this. This was awesome :D Love how the young played together and that katnip too...

Grr so sweeet I dont know what to say. Thanks for this!! Good luck on the contest? :D

OMG MORE MORE MORE hehe

I love Dale and Kenyo, their young, all their friends and family...How much he loves his chosen made me cry,thank you

I haven't even read the story yet but got so excited i wanted to say thanks in advance :) You rock!

This story was fantastic. I loved following Dale, Keyno and the others thru The Harvest and this completes it. I lost my mom in May and this is my first Christmas without her. I cried most of the way thru this story. I have my memories of past Christmases to fill my empty heart. Thank you for reminding me that family is the most important thing we are given.

Finally a day off after working a week straight, seeing a new Dale story finding it's 7 pages long BEST DAY EVER thank you xxx I love it x

I cannot wait for Szin's story now! You could tell by little hints who was mated with whom. Like, Raiden and Dayo, Szin and Takeo, Neo and Hamza, and finally, Laken and Patlo. I was kind of curious who Laken's mate was, but as soon as you introduced Lomar and Hunter and Patlo, I knew. Yet another amazing story! And just think, I got to read this and revist Dale, Keyno, and the gang, and now I'm going to go and read RobCub's Timber Pack's chapter eight! Best night ever!

dont know what else i could say that has not already been said...i had tears, hystrical laughter and some awwhhhh swept moments....as usual your stories are beautiful and touching and i love how long they are. it was great to catch up with dale and keyno along with szin and raiden, and all the others as well...their love for each other and their new found family is so pure and beautiful just great!!!!!! thanx for making my day more pleasurable. you are a great and appeasing writer, no doubts about it :-)

As always I loved it. I love this on going series and I hope you're already writing more of it. :-)

i've just finished reading this installment and oh boy, you had me laughing and crying and grinning and and and ... thank you thank you thank you!

Now I want more...It was cute and funny and sexy. Reading the beginning where you were giving us a background of everything again was weird but figured there some who haven't read harvest yet(which would be unbelievable).So now we want more of our Tar families and it's good to see the intro of new characters like Hunter and Lomar with their young

Its very nice to read about the Ta'Narian family again. I love reading this this has hot to be one of the greatest stories I've ever read. I hope to read more of your work soon and maybe more on them. Thank you.

I absolutely loved it all my favourite character back together it was just beautiful! Thank you so much for posting it.

Love the new addition to Dale and Keyno's story can't wait for the youngs' stories.

The story was very good, and stayed quite true to the characterizations you created in the earlier installments. There were a few small typos, but nothing incredibly distracting. I do have one question though....Why is everyone still on Ta'Nar? I thought I recalled a plan at the end of the series for everyone to build homes on Aploi as a dual Ta'Narian & Onfrevian colony.

Christmas should always be celebrated with our most beloved.

Thank you for this loveliness.

Have a Merry and Blessed Christmas too.

Awesome story! (as always) Look forward to more...

Normally I'm a Christmas grump, but this is an unusual -- yet universal -- reminder of what the holiday season is really about: Family, in all its forms. Well done. And the catnip sex was great, too. ;o)

Reading this story, this entire series actually, definitely puts a smile on my face. Plus the fact that its a Christmas story and a wonderful tale of family just makes it all the more special. Thank You.

I loved it, the young are so cute!! Cannot wait for the story about them to come out (:

As always! I can tell that you are a mom by how well you wrote the young :-). So good to see Ti and Cielo coming to visit, they’re always my faves. On pg 1 you wrote “Szin might look human, but he was smart”… are you implying that humans are not smart?!?!! LOL Thanks again for another well written story and as we have come to expect from you, the sex was HOT HOT HOT!

I've have been holding my breath waiting for another installment of this story and you made my day with this one. It was great!

Lol, szin and raiden reminds me of me and my bros when we were younger... and now, their antics had me dying from laughter, and omg, keyno, the young with the bubbles roflol... perfect holiday story, bravo

I loved it, you are making me love these characters more and more and i love that Susan, Evan and Lindsay could come aswell, you are just a wonderful writer and i can't wait to see what happens next, i am wondering about Patlo and Lindsey?? I love your writing and i hope you will not keep us waiting for more

Loved it and I can't wait to read Szin's story :)

You totally made my day! Loved this installment and can't wait for more.

Merry Christmas.

xoxo

~night

When I started to read this story, I knew this had to be a sequel to another story. So I'm reading this wrong way, now I will go to read The Harvest. But I don't mind, I love this story and the characters so much I want to read that one too.

You know what would be great? To read Szin and Raiden find their chosen ones too. If you get the inspiration to continue.

Okay, I'm off to read more about these lovelies. Thank you for the great story!

Ladite

Yes, you continue to totally enhance your readers with loveable characters and fascinating imaginative ideas. And A Ta'Narian Christmas is the best reflection of what you give us. Thank you.

lovin it so much............ill never gget tired of their story, one of my favorite stories on this site

I left you a few comments on your FB page and you never said anything of this..I have missed Dale/Kenyo they are 2 of my favorites characters. All I can say is MORE. Also, I love the Doc"Doc" on the coat. Still don't know his name yet!! Driving me crazy........

Absolutely LOVED this story! Totally Awesome!

Hurray and thanks for an early holiday treat! It was great immersing myself in the world you created in Harvest, as always it did not disappoint. Stellar job my friend.

Happy holidays to you and yours.

Peace and joy,

Shell

Such an amazing and heartwarming story! I feel like I got a visit from family! I feel so connected to the characters of your story. I smiled through almost the entire story -- loved all the details you included and the traditions as well -- old and new -- loved how you had Susan and Evan and Lindsay visit also. Thank you for such a fabulous tale! You are so amazing and talented!

Jodi

I was so happy to see another story from you and to visit with Dale and Keyno and all the rest of the gang from "The Harvest" ~big smiles~ I bet you had a good time visiting them too. GREAT STORY.!

good it was so good i had to read i 4 times

You had me in sraet......

It was a great Christmas gift. I loved this chapter. Now I am waiting eagerly for The Young's stories & Pure. Keep up the wonderful work.

Merry Christmas, Glenna

OH MY GOD! You have no idea how happy you just made me! I actually called one of my friends just to tell her you had posted the story (we're both absolutely devoted fans). You just made my day :-)

Merry Christmas to you and your family.

Very lovely and sweet:) A perfect visit with my favourite guys! Thank you for this touching gift:)

Merry Christmas!:)

I loved it as I can't get enough of these guys Merry Christmas

Nobody writes like you. It was sweet, nostalgic and sexy.

Tears, joy, excitement, and that was just me!

Love the family being involved, loved the story.

You are truly a great story teller, and have a great set of characters!

Keep the stories coming....please!

I'm bein dorky but ive fallen in love with your diction and writing style. Not to mention the stories themselves.

I forgive you for disappearing for such a long time. 7 pages? You truly deserve a good long break. Happy holidays! I'll probably read it again around Christmas lol

Backwards spelling overload; almost killed the story.

If only Christmas was really that easy. Must get me a reuplicator!

Great as always. Can't wait to read more...

Great story as always. Only thing that may have taken away from the overall enjoyment was the reverse spelling. I'm sure even Ta'narians have 'towels' (lewots). I get the 'yppan' bag, but the other words were just a bit much.

But other than that - great work on the Xmas story! :D

I love it. A beautiful Christmas story. I hope you'll continue with the series. I want to find out what happens with all the young when they grow up.

I disagree - not a back'words' "overload". It was just right.

And as ALWAYS... absolutely WONDERFUL!!!!

I wasn't expecting a Ta'Narian Christmas but I loved it!! If you could write about this world forever I would be totally happy, but you know what I would've loved to see? a little bit of the interaction of Ti and Cielo with Takeo just because even though I know they have a young and everything in my mind I still find it hard to picture these two badass guys as loving dads, but well that's just me. Anyways great story!!

- Sam

I was glad to read this. It is nice that you have decided to do an update on progress.

Very heartwarming. I'm thinking I could really use a reduplicator about now! Talk about making Christmas shopping easy! I wonder if you could get them reduplicated already wrapped! LOL!

Imaginative and fun story. Thanks for the Christmas present!

I'm a huge fan of The Harvest, and wished Susan and Evan would change their minds, so I'm really glad they did!

The baloons and bubbles were great, I'm still laughing!

I have loved all of the Harvest stories, but this one is very nice. Please continue to keep these characters alive for us.

as usual, you surpass your own works....great job here though some typos can be found here and there but still this is good and heartwarming esp with the theme of Christmast here.

Great to read about the young. They are so cute. Makes me think about my little grandson, born earlier this year. You can make scientific nonsense credible, just because your characters are so nice.

That was heart-warming, humorous, emotional, and a perfect holiday story. You swept me into your unique world of Ta'narians (which I have yet to read Harvest, but will do so now) and kept me riveted to the pages! Your cat-like antics were spot on. The connection and love between mates, just beautiful. The relationships between family and friends believable. The behavior of the young adorable and the memories of the earthlings put me in mind of my own family traditions. I share in Dale's tears of joy. Amazing! Good luck. :)

~Luna

I love the whole Ta'Narian series and can't wait for another story.

5 STARS, DARLING! <3

Just saw you were one of the winners for the Winter Holiday's Contest! Congrats!

This was utterly fantastic!!! I'm soooo happy I came by to re-read your series, otherwise it would have been a bit of time before I saw this wonderful new chapter/story. This was perfect!!! *happy grin*

Thanks so much for sharing!

This was a huge surprise!

In all truthfullness I did not think you would be continueing this series.

It was wickedly awesome.. hehe

Thank you so much for the early xmas gift.

xx

Congratulations on winning FIRST PLACE in the 2011 Winter Holiday Contest! The story was an excellent addition to Ta'Narian world you created.

You certainly deserved it!!

Yayyyyyyy!!!! CONGRATS!!! :)

Amazing job as always!! Keep on writing!!! :)

Cheers!!

SUPER AND I DO MEAN SUPER GREAT............

NOTHING ELSE ONE CAN SAY.

I wanted to say thank ya! I never dreamed it would place first. *laugh* I damn near fell out of bed when I found out that morning.

~M

absolutely love it. I read all of them from the very first chapter to this one. I hated to put it down.

I didn't expect that.

It was a glorious story. It was charming story, in some ways simple, in others complex. It was easy to read and, even though it was an alien cast in an alien situation, easy to understand. A very polished story that suprised me more than it should have.

BRILLIANT :)

Utterly amazing!

a well deserved winner. Beautifuly written, funny and sexy! proof a story dosn't have to be crammed with full on sex scenes to be errotic. congratulations

Must... Stop... Reading.......

**Stares at clock** Dangit and I wanted to sleep early!

Your stories are addicting...

Your name doesn't fit with your stories...I've got tears for days! Lol

So wonderful!!

You have such a way of drawing the reader into your stories. I almost feel like I know the characters personally. The love story is perfect and your sex scenes are always very Hot.... ;-)

I have to admit that i have read all of your submissions and am in love with this series the best you have combined both the erotic and the emotional aspects so well i love the interaction you have with all your characters

What a series. I want to read more. I have read all your submissions for this series. I see areas within all of your submissions that you could make so many sub stories. Let me tell you, I am a serious reader. Normally I read classics, literature, monster sized series from many well known authors. I have to say, yours falls within the category of the monster sized series. Think dune. Well, yes, there are some things that will need to be tweaked to get it there but you have that talent. I can tell you that I sat and read the whole thing twice, completely and about cried. This type of story is needed. A special love story. Gay themed, drama, action, information. I wish there was so much more. I laughed, was incensed, got hot (very hot), and dreamed about this for days till today that I decided to write this. Please, is this available for sale in print form? Yes it might be easy to save this to my hard drive but you are a true author and deserve to get paid. Please, keep me as a friend, and let me know if you ever plan on selling copies, or if you plan on writing more. Just one thing, when Kenyo and dale get together with cielo and his partner, i went cold with fright praying that their love would keep them together and not mess things up in the future - because Kenyo adores dale and I understood the intrecasies of their bond.... It got my heart like that. I have only had reactions like that from the mayfair witches and ilium. Please continue to write. My name Robert. You are now one of my favorite authors. Thank you for sharing your wonderful creativity.

One of my favorite stories. It was definitely a tear-jerker, but in the best possible way. You are awesome.

Any chance of a Ta'Narian Valentine's Day?

I have to say that if this was a book I would buy it. Awesome story and well written. I am really interested in knowing what is happening with the children. They seem to be mated? I would love to read their stories. Please write them soon.

Still one of my favorite stories. I love the scene when Keyno is holding Dale in the kitchen, rubbing his neck, and Dale's parents come in. It shows how much they love each other. I do question the time line, though. At the end of The Harvest, I thought the yooung were babies, or at least toddlers. Now, in this story, which takes place some months later, the young are walking, talking and acting more like three or four year olds. Just a curiosity.

Has anyone else noticed that most of nomoretears00's stories have been taken off Literotica, specifically The Haven series and her three mythology stories. They are among my favorites and I have sent e-mails to try to find out what has happened.

I did email you back on the 14th. I'm guessing you didn't get my email? For anyone who may be wondering what happeded... I removed my Greek Gods and The Harvest. There have been a *lot* of stories stolen from Lit lately, and the last rash included several GM authors. I wasn't one of the ones that was stolen from... this time.

And that's the problem. Next time I may be. I plan to publish Priceless, Perfect and Pure, plus The Harvest. I can't take the chance someone may steal them, guys. This wasn't an easy chioce to make, believe me. I wanted to leave both series up until right before they were released as ebooks, but this deal with stealing has me really worried. I still plan to post to Lit it just won't be things I want to publish.

This information is on my bio here at Lit. It's on my blog, plus there are short stories, an interview with Dale and lots of other things if anyone is interested. I update pretty often, too. This is my blog http://machurch00.blogspot.com

If anyone has emailed me... I'm working my way through the emails. I will respond, so if I didn't then something must have happened and I didn't get the email, or the return address was invaid. I've had one come back already.

Sorry, guys. Please understand I didn't want to do this, but I have to protect my work.

~M

Your harvest stories were the main reason why I like coming to this site. I can't wait for the young stories to come out. I really enjoy your writing.

Sooo is there anyway we can read 'The Harvest' again? I am lucky enough to finish 'The Harvest' series before you take out the stories but now I want to read it againnnn

At least you had the chance of reading The Harvest series. New readers like me have missed out on something that was obviously awesome. Not only based on the comments below but also how much I enjoyed reading this single story. Well, hopefully I'll get to buy the book one day, please keep us posted on its release.

If you check out Nomoretears author bio, at the bottom there is a section for notes and a blog site is listed. You can check there for story updates, printing info, etc. With the latest problem of story theft, several authors have removed stories but most of them have blogs where you can follow them. It's not as easy as having one site to go to, but at least you can still follow them.

I check every few days to see if there are comments on what happened. Avid is right, my blog addy is on my bio. :)

*laugh* I agree it's a pain having to hop from one blog to another... I'm having to do it also, lol, to keep up with the other authors'! So I feel ya there. :)

~M

what happened to the rest of the story i really enjoyed it

I've been away from this site over a year now, came looking for "The Harvest" (which I had read twice) only to discover it was no longer on the site. I couldn't remember the author but I had bookmarked by favorites, so I checked one by one until I found you. This story like the earlier ones is a classic. When I'm down, feeling in the dumps, all I needed was to read your stories to lift my spirits and put a smile on my face. You've created a story that could go on forever and I hope you share it with everyone. Will be looking forward to "The Harvest" in print. THANKS! :)

It doesn't matter how many time I read this, it's still hot as hell and the bubbles and balloons scene has me laughing out loud everytime.

Can't wait for the release of 'Harvest" so i can re-read from the beginning. :o)

I'm really, really sorry and I know I'm being a nitpicking pest but there are one or two things I've picked up about the timeline in this story that bother me, even though it continues to be one of my favorites. I love the scene in the morning when Keyno is just holding Dale and nuzzling his neck, when Dale's parents see how much they love each other.

As for the timeline issues, well, for one, the young are too advanced. According to the story, it's only months after the visit to earth, when they were still babies. Toddlers, I could see but not talking, reasoning, etc.

How long does it take to get from earth to Ta'Naria? It seems to me one day Keyno is making plans and the very next day, the parents are there. I thought it took longer than one day to make the trip. (It would have taken Dale's mother at least a day to just get everything ready!}

I have read this several times and The Harvest (which i miss in my favorite list) I can't wait until The Harvest is published for Kindle so i can download it, I just love the relationship between Dale and Keyno and the young just crack me up, i hope there will be more stories about these two and their close circle of friends, keep writing and i promise i will keep reading!!!!!

I loved The Harvest and hope I will soon have a chance to buy it (maybe you could post a Ta'narian story, even a very short one, when it comes out).

Extra thanks for giving all these people a merry Christmas and for having Evan mend his ways.

If you click on the author's name, it will take you to her infornation pages. Check at the bottom of the biography page and her blog is listed. Nomoretears has just started a new story dealing with the young, specifically Szin. She also recently posted the last chapter of The Harvest, which was when Ti, Cielo, Keyno and Dale got together for a four-way.

love this. theres no other t'narian stories on nomore tearsoo profile. i looked. really want to read the other story the other comments are on about called the harvest. why is it not on her profile? x

Confused cherub. The Harvest was removed for publishing. If you go to the author's blog, she's running a story now on the Second Generation, starting with Szin and Takeo. You can find her blogsite at the bottom of her biography page.

loved it. super sad i found this after you deleted the harvest so i have no idea how it started. hopefully youll post it someone one day and ill get a chance to see where it all began.

The Harvest is under contract with Storm Moon Press as of 4/22/13. It's such a long story it had to be broken into two books. The Harvest:Taken will be released late October 2013. Book two is under contract too. And Storm Moon is interested in the young stories. :)

For those of you who didn't get to read the original, I'm very sorry. I removed The Harvest because of the amount to stealing that happens on Lit. I just couldn't take the chance it would be stolen and published by someone. And that happened to an author who used to write here.

As for A Ta'Narian Christmas, it was left up because it won a contest and couldn't be taken down for two years. I know this caused some confusion, but those were Lit rules. The Harvest is no long out anywhere, but there is stuff on Dale and the gang on my blog http://machurch00.blogspot.com/ , The Harvest FB page http://machurch00.blogspot.com/, and I'm nomoretear00 on Twitter.

For those of you who have been with me since the beginning... Thank you for your support. :) It's meant so much to me, guys. And for any new fans, stop by my blog and meet the boys, lol. They are a hoot!

~Michelle

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