All Comments on 'A Teacher Is Tempted'

Really hot story, but in the interests of being constructive, I feel like you could have made more out of this. This sort of story is everywhere, and it needs a bit of character depth and conflict and that sort of thing to make it stand out.

That said, I still enjoyed this, and anyway this is all just my opinion. Keep writing!

Of the two lead characters. Of course not?

Only the male can be dominant, older, and have a "demonic" female pursue him he can't resist. Girls/ women in the "student," position. Inferiors to their--"teachers."

Just reverse every sex role in this story--and make it for females. Let women have the demonic lovers--be the teachers to the students.

You might as well be talking about white masters and black slaves.

Oh yeah, blacks were often considered demonic, too. Voodoo an all that.

You fuckin sound like Garrison Keiler--don't fuckin care how it's spelled.

Men of God in the god damn midwest.

Save us!