by WallsOverSidewalks
you must NEVER use Vaseline with condoms! Vaseline dissolves the latex in condoms. You use KY Jelly with condoms.
I'm a straight girl and holy smackeroos, you had me loving every minute of this story...I loved the hurt the anguish, the pain, the suffering, the love...most importantly it was the love that shun through and not made it all about the sex (granted the sex was awesome but it was romantic and sexy).........Keep up the great writing.
FANTASTIC STORY- Truly wonderful, it was so...powerful, and heart wrenchingly joyful...beautiful, a work of art, you should publish it.
Hell, I'm a straight woman and that even got me going. It was a beautifull story I thought and it was well written too. Keep up the good work ;)
Alicexxx
OMG THAT STORY WAS AMAZING IM CRYING AS I RIGHT THIS AH ALL I CAN SAY IS GREAT JOB
I'm a straight girl who was raped early in life and in highschool had a similar experience going out with a caring and concerned teacher (it didn't work out though). It was both weird and moving to read a story with so much resonance.
I stopped at Vaseline+Condom for the reason stated above. However, I did find the story enjoyable. Unfortunately, I believe you have a potential novel, if you take the time to work out more subplots and conflicts. Conflict with Andy is passable, but needs a lot more work. Affair provides lot of potential conflict for the Professor. In short, this story has so much potential it should be worked on in much more detail than it is.
You can't use Vaseline or baby oil with condoms. Well, you could, but it would defeat the purpose of using a condom - those lubricants cause the condom to break down and tear. AstroGlide or KY is much, much better for sensation as well as protection. Great story, though!
Then they fucked. The story had a nice build up, but then it felt like you rushed through the sex scene. Even the ending felt rushed, like you didn't know how to end it. How about Austin getting the assholes back by pressing charges? Would have been nice to see that happen.
I hope you would consider writing another chapter to this. It is a great story line. I love it.