by DragonflySong
I'd love to read Ch. 03 if you're interested in writing it. The erotic part of the story is handled with a lot of good insight. Makes me wonder what your characters would say during an intimate post-coital discussion.
I'm curious as to what those things are. Lol. Please continue and soon. Loved this story.
Wish it were me; I was there, you or her.
You've GOT to write a third part to this. You have time, like she said, the flight doesn't leave until eight something tomorrow. Hurry up. Get them fucking again. Got to be a toy or something there.
Very good. Have to say I joined them from here. Thanks.
Putting a husband in to the mix will only fuck it up big time. They always do. They do not understand the needs of a woman. I do believe that most marriages would be better of if the wife had a female lover. A secret female lover! Both males and especially females need to realize that males, except for reproduction, are not needed. Ever!!!
An excellent read! Hope to see more coming (so to speak)!
Very very well done. It is very refreshing to find a writer of this high quality. Please let me know when you write chapter 3. You are one of the best. The world deserves to hear more of your storytelling. Along with the gift of storytelling comes the responsibility to share your insights wisdom and experience .
I can't say enough good things about this writer.
Sincerely LuckyMM
I certainly hope there's a chapter three coming shortly. You're telling wonderful story.
Great story, well written, believable scenario, l can't wait for more! Soon hopefully,