All Comments on 'A Thank You, From Lily'

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brianbigdogsmithbrianbigdogsmithabout 12 years ago
NICE STORY

ANOTHER NICE STORY READ YOUR STORY IN TABOO AND CHECKED OUT THIS ONE. THANKS FOR POSTING.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
confused?

she came in to find a specific book, Johannes Dream, but they do not have in so he recommends one by Grisham. and yet, when she asks him over to discuss the substitute book he recommended, which one did she mysteriously have? yup, the they did not have.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Very weak and general poor grammar.....

ARE and OUR are not the same. Sentences do not start with BUT.....

Rolls "of" me....perhaps you meant "OFF" me.....?

Do a "proof-read" next time.

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