All Comments on 'A Thank You to Remember'

Beyond the odd wrong word, well put together and interesting. Thanks.

"Loving Wives" needs more loving wife stories.

A monogamous couple? Clearly this belongs in fetish.

So concur with JayDiver. I don't see this in kind of gem often enough in LW genre. But I keep looking.

Not a lot of meat on these bones, but it's a straightforward sex scene between a man and his loving wife. I've never really understood the appeal of the "I fucked my wife" genre, but it seems to be popular.

Even "flash stories" should have a point, and I'm not sure what the point of this one is. Housework leads to great sex? If only that were true! I think this one would have worked better if you had given us the setup, showing us how hubby was a lazy-ass who refused to do any housework, getting on the wife's nerves, etc.. Then the payment for services rendered would have resounded with far greater impact.

Keep at it. Thanks for contributing.

"Loving Wives" is a tongue-in-cheek description

The category is described as: "Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more."

Basically, all the "cuck shit" is exactly where it's supposed to be

Get over yourselves

Although this was a nice little story

Nice to see a true living wife story. The mispellings and extra-long paragraphs did detract from it. Not a lot, but enough to slow the action down a tad. 4* and hope to see more. Suggest if you are going to do a longer work, find a volunteer editor, or try proof reading it a few times yourself. You'd be surprised how many mistakes you can spot on a reread. I know I do all the time.

Thanks for sharing and hope to see more from you!

Not badly done either. A husband and wife having a good time. Nice.

You got that right, a husband and wife having a good time. Usually it's the wife having a good time with the neighbor or best friend and the husband getting his rocks off watching. Now that's the good time that many readers here seem to relish. LOL

I guess it comes down to whatever turns your crank.

Keeping it within the marriage. Makes it five stars to me. Thank you.

the problem is miracles don't happen very often

Why don't you try reading!

LW=Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing

1* for another idiotic author that doesn't bother reading the categories.

Keeping sex within the marriage is great, but I do wonder what she does when she goes out to meet her clients.

By the way lean to spell don't rely on a spell checker.

As much as I love a real loving wife story, I love hearing cucks gripe about them even more.

What the hell was this?

No gay writer writing a story about a gay man eating another mans cum from a skanks STD delivery system?

No repressed homosexual desires being released through a horribly written story done for the 15,384th time?

Well done my good man.

And best of all the outrage by the south of the Mason/Dixon Cuckservatives is worth the price of admission