All Comments on 'A Thong on the End of the World'

The correct phrase is “beck and call.” If you are at someone's beck and call, you respond immediately whether he or she beckons or calls; it implies complete subservience.

It's an old phrase, originating in the late 1800s, during a time when “beck” was used to mean “beckon.”

I felt as though the story lacked a real resolution. Kevin picked Bridget, and that was it. I wish Tina had gotten more attention, mostly because she seems like the perfect girl. Give us a part 2, and more Tina? Please and thank you.

I think you are missing that this was supposed to be a short story so their cant really be the big build up or development but yes it would of been awesome if this was a full story. Really grammar you nothing better to do than that wow no life. As always loved it and cant wait for more :D

Another fantastic story with another fantastic femme fatale.

The flash forwards were excellent! Built up the sexual tension and suspense beautifully.

Man, I can't get enough of your stories. Get your next one on Lit before New Years!!

Loved IT!!!!!!!!

Don't pay any attention to the people who obviously didn't the very first of the story or for that matter the update you posted on the 18th say that this was going to be a short story to tide your readers over till your next story is posted. You are quickly becoming one my favorite authors here on LITEROTICA. You keep 'em coming and I for will keep reading 'em.

P.S. could you try a story that elements of sci-fi in it along with all the other elements that make your stories highly entertaining,

"Look at my body, sis. Can you blame him?" Bridget cackled.

ROFLMAO

Except for the flahbacks, good story. Perhaps a sequel with more sex.

I have ever read.

of a piece of bullshit. could not even make it through the first page.

This story had potential, but the thought of a sister just taking everything another sister ever loved is just heartless. Its good to see a temptress in this storyline getting the last laugh but i just wasn't feeling how good it was. Lets hope you will do a better one next time you make another one :p

Then why even bother with leaving a comment when you didn't even read the whole story. Honestly, if this is not your type of story, why do assholes like you decide its their responsibility to try and make everyone else feel bad about it? You affect nothing but the perception of yourself as being a judgmental jerk who doesn't value that other people have different tastes than their own.

Horrible....if you are going to be doing flash backs....at the very least make it so they actually make sense with the entire piece....Not to mention this isn't even really a Taboo story....if the two sisters ended up screwing together than it would of been "Taboo" but just because they are a "sister-in-law" doesn't equate to Taboo...This is just a really pathetic and horrible "story" of a husband cheating

Incest? No. They are not blood related. But there is a reason why this category includes the word "taboo" and its to allow stories like these to be in this genre. It ultimately is up to the author how they want to classify this kind of story. There have been mother-in-law stories in the "mature" and "incest/taboo" categories and sister-in-law stories in "taboo" and "erotic couplings". While this isn't incest, I would say it is definitely taboo. The only reason people associate the word taboo directly with incest is because of the porn film series, which eventually changed its theme to not be about incest at all, and instead focused on general sexual debauchery. It seems strange to critique a story based on something like that when its made clear by the website that these in-law stories fit within the realm of "taboo". And if you don't like cheating husband stories, then why do you bother reading it???

Another excellent TheTalkMan story. You proved you're capable of the shorter stories with this one which is great, not that there's anything terrible about the longer ones but I did find the Cline story difficult to push through towards the end.

The element of taboo to this one was good and added an extra kick.

I think the sweet spot will be somewhere between a story this length and your more usual fare. A little more exposition than this but not over the top.

Looking forward to your next one.

Another classic on your part. This was just really creative and fun. Great work.

Fuck you asshole! I hope you get fucked over like this one day!!!

Jumping around so much took away from the read. It broke up the natural flow of the story.

I've replied before on your stories, TheTalkMan, not to let the naysayers get to you. Stories like these always end up creating a bipolar affect. Either people love them, or they hate them. I think it was fantastic. I also think it's really cool that OnlyaFantasy made a comment, since he wrote some really good stories in the genre almost 4 years ago. Thank you so much for your contributions, TheTalkMan. Don't let the haters get to you. You have a ton of fans, and you're a huge inspiration for others writing in this genre, so again, thanks so much!

It was a very hot story. Some of us understand fantasy and others don't. Keep up the wonderful writing!

A great story, simple story-line, effective delivery and nice and ideally sized. Sizzling content. Perfection.

Thank you, Mr Talkman sir.

Great content as always and I love the format you used.

RAW amateur jumps around to much to be readable

Wow Bridget was a bitch!

damn. i wouldn't choose bridget if it is the end of the world. that crazy bitch...

fuck who wouldn't choose Bridget? hahaha

Good story.. I actually feel bad for tina

Another 1.

I know this is made up and a fantasy but just so cruel it turns off the erotic side. Just bad that 2 people can be that much of a sack of shit human being

Barely a 1. No one can be that cruel to their own sister. The man wsd just an idiot taken in by plastic tits and a smile.

she should have shoved a broom up bridgets ass and slit her throat with a kitchen knife

or someone kills you.

That was so hot

Feels a bit unsatisfying that they got away with it. I was hoping for a twist with Tina battering them both with a shovel.

this was a waste of 30 minutes of my life

this doesn't deserve a comment

A good premise-different kinds of women, different values, the same man appreciating both women and their contrastive values,but the premise was inadequately developed.

The flashbacks, in my view did not help improve the suspense of the story, the story would be much more suspenseful without them

That was the worst story I've ever read at this sight. I just hope they get better from here.

What is wrong with the author? What a waste of time. I skipped the last two pages just to get to the comments.

Loved the time jumps and comedic relief. Solid writing.

Bridget you'd better leave, oops I'm holding your tits occidentally, I'd best fuck you. Meh, it's only the end of the world why should I not be with my wife?

As he lay there, Tina got up and went to the kitchen. When she returned she ran her hand along Kevin's dick to the tip before grip it and running her hand back and forth along the length. As he awoke and realised what was happening Kevin lay there smiling, he reached out and run his up his wife's back, feeling her shudder he thought it could be a good turn of events.

Tina hoped that the shudder was in interpreted as the disgust she felt at his touch and carried on running her hand back and forth and as Kevin was about as hard as he could get she leaned forward as if to kiss and smelt her sister on him. She turned her head a looked at him saying "I can smell Bridget, would you like me to taste her?"

Kevin smiled and nodded, "Oh, Tina, please,"

Tina smiled, pulled his dick straight up and with a swift movement bought her other hand, holding a large, sharp kitchen knife, across the base of it taking it off in one clean movement. She then held it up before him and kissed the end before the shock wore off and he cried out in agony. Tina got and as she left the room Bridget came running and just before they passed, she flipped his dick in the air to Bridget saying "You might need this."

Tina took his wallet and the car keys and drove off into the sunset, the authorities were wrong, the end of the world had come and gone, this was the start of a brave new world.

Epilogue, in his pain and shock Kevin lost it and grabbed the next person to walk in the room, realising, in this fog of madness that it was someone in some way responsible for his current condition he started to choke her.

Bridget struggled and grabbed the knife that Tina had dropped on the floor, but it was too late, as her hand closed around it, she gave up her last breath. Kevin unaware that she was dead, kept on choking her until he was too weak to carry on.

They found them entwined on the floor 2 week later, Kevin still with his hands on her neck, Bridget with his dick in one hand and the knife in the other.

With no other next of kin, Tina inherited the small fortune and properties that Bridget had built up over the years and of course she was sole inheritor of the remainder of the small estate Kevin and she had built up.

Sorry, thought you'd left it a little open at the end.

Your male characters are weak and your female characters are mean... like drag queen mean; The kind of female mean that boarders on television. You have an issue with a specific woman, and you keep having your female characters humiliate her. The Ted Bundy of writing

Didn't really see it coming. Also liked the long alternate ending where Tina inherits everything.

I loved this! I can't wait for your next story

But nice

Who fucking hot. Cunt crazed fucker, Lanc’s U.K.

1 star, cuz i don't like cheaters

I swear to God if I was the girl my husband would have done that I'll will make him taste hell his whole life

I still don’t understand, she smashed the door with a rock, she could have done the same to the bitches head

Great plot twist for a surprise ending. Didn't see that coming.

Crap, absolute crap!!

What audience is this appealing to?

Different strokes and whatever. The actual sex is total crap though. It's not even erotic as a specialized kink for lack of a better name. Gave it 1/5 because of the cheating shit-for-brains husband. Nothing else even mattered.

beck and call, not beckon call. lol.

1 hrs earlier, 1 hrs later- totally confused story. And if erotic value is the raison d'etre for being in Literotica, the value is almost nil. And culminating to a meaningless crappy ending. Total Bellshill!! 1 star for the wee bit sex.

This was nonsense. An Evil sister triumph over a very good person. This was a fucking garbage. I don't like evil.