All Comments on 'A Threeway Checkup'

"U" and "ur"? Really?

Nothing here that has any believability to it.

...to rip this up and burn it!

This was actually a private message to my husband. I texted it to him at work. And he convinced me to submit it. So I just copied and pasted. I will fix the u and ur. I only do that for personal friends. Plus. This was my first time. Next time I'll try harder.

"I then got on top of her and put my pussy in her mouth. "

So how do you do that?

I could understand a cock IN her mouth, or a pussy ON her mouth, but unless one of you is non human size and or shape pussy does not fit in mouth.

The text-speak could have worked if it was written as a transcript of the text message, any other way it is really annoying and many find it annoying even as a transcript.

If you want good comments or good scores, then you don't want to annoy your readers. (there are some writers here that provoke their readers on purpose though)