by Hibbidyhai
There has to be a second chapter on the way? The idea was great. In the next chapter you should take the idea the other way. If it is illegal for elves to get pregnant before marriage then there have to be plenty of very horny male elves out there.
Interesting idea, but because it is so poorly written, it is unreadable.
Not bad at all. Quite well written though I find the presence of jeans in a fantasy world to be somewhat anachronistic given that most fantasy worlds are medieval in style