All Comments on 'A Touch Turned to Flame Pt. 01'

I really hate it when only one page is posted. I like story lines that build you up and leave you wanting more - but more pages or chapters, please.......

Did you really know the meaning? Snatch: The second most horrific sounding nickname for the human female's genitals(after cunt). So much so that it can only be properly applied when descibing genitals that are presumed or understood to be filthy or disgusting.

Sorry, I love your previous stories, but stopped reading this at that moment...

Heh, okay so I'll take that into consideration next chapter. I hope you'll read it and that my textual plunder wasn't too bad. Would be a shame to see someone stop reading my stories because of such a thing.

But thanks for the love with my other work :)

- Asyncronous

Aah "suckie-suckie " now! This is getting good