All Comments on 'A Trip Down Memory Lane'

Your profile name on here caught my attention and i expected you would be creative. I did not expect that you would be such a talented writer. Thank you for submitting and I look forward to reading future posts! If you would like some ideas for story lines I would be honored to help... can be reached at j79324@gmail.com

Glad to have had my first reader, and glad you enjoyed! ;) I'll try to submit more in the next few months; keep an eye out!

That's a good story by a good writer. I'll look forward to reading more. Just a point for your first commenter. If you're as creative as he says you are (and I think you are) the you're not going to need his input for storylines. Unless you particuarly want to collaberate with another author, then don't! It doesn't usually work - I know, I've tried.

You seem to be an excellent writer. I eagerly await more!

Yes I too eagerly await more submissions here thanks for a well done tale..

Wow, great story! You fit a lot of hot imagery into 1 page. (I wish I could do that)

I'm disappointed to see you only have this one story posted, and it has been quite a while.

I would love to hear more from you ;->