All Comments on 'A Trip to Burma Ch. 02'

by leBonhomme

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SomethingInTheWaySheMovesSomethingInTheWaySheMovesabout 10 years ago
Curious to see if you can take criticism, I checked the comments on this story, remembering that I HAD commented.

To my surprise... Well, actually, I'm not surprised to see that there are no negative comments here. All gone. Hmm. Or as you'd write, "Hmmm-humm-humm-hmmm". But 'all' the negative comments are gone ...and there are no 'positive' comments, I have to wonder if you received any. Hmmmmmm?

leBonhommeleBonhommeabout 10 years agoAuthor
Something ...

If you did comment on this story, it was an anonymous comment similar to several others elsewhere that complain about my style of writing dialogue. They get tiresome, sounding like kids just shooting their mouths off. I delete anonymous comments of that type now.

Your "signed" comment on another story I did reply to, and someone agreed with me. I trust that you were not the writer of any of the anonymous comments.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I rated this a 5 and I loved the fuck-licking session and the tasting of his cum knowing he would be doing the same thing. Good imagination.

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