All Comments on 'A Trip to Purgatory'

A breath of fresh air to read a story that didn''t have 9-inch dicks and 38DD boobs! For a short story, the characters sympathetic and believable the plot didn't leave you wondering "WTF??!!??" Good effort!

Well told. Looking forward to seeing how well crafted.

This was a sneaky little story, both the characters and how the story snuk up on the reader.

Love the surprise of an experienced man showing the nymph how it is possible to be gentle and patient and still a randy man.

Looking for more!

Your lengthy and convoluted beginning lost m

likable characters...must admit my 1st thought was '...no WAY..!." when he said he wanted to roger her rump, given her tiny bod curuious to see how/where all the other characters you introduced fit into Ch2

I enjoyed the story, but it only get **4**stars...the ending was too abrupt; it was left at a point that was unsatisfying. There could have been , at least, a little more post-sex conversation so they (and we) could get to know each other better/learn more about who they are...maybe even arrange for a follow-up assignation!

Still, on to part 2, see where author takes the story...and with whom...

I enjoyed the story, but it only get **4**stars...the ending was too abrupt; it was left at a point that was unsatisfying. There could have been , at least, a little more post-sex conversation so they (and we) could get to know each other better/learn more about who they are...maybe even arrange for a follow-up assignation!

Still, on to part 2, see where author takes the story...and with whom...