All Comments on 'A Trip to Texas'

Well planned and paced, very human, and a story I'd love to have lived.

Thank you, what more is there to say

A beautiful story about beautiful people.

Well written and interesting, great way to start the weekend, thanks.

Mature and very attractive characters, sexy without being cheap, real feelings between 2 people - what is there not to love.

PLEASE, keep writing more of this.

The people are very believable and interesting. They way they work around their fear of the rebound effect is interesting. Of course, neither of them had any grave problems.... Just memories.

It was an excellent story, one of the better ones I have read in while. I can only hope that you post more of the same quality.

Excellent story.

I enjoyed the long gradual build up.

Definitely better than so much of the "wham bam, thank you ma'am" drivel that we see here.

This is one of the best piece of reading I have done on this site. Please honor us with more like this. BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I found myself getting drawn into the story as I have not for quite some time on this site. Looking forward to your next one. Jerry

Loved every word! it was very fun to read! Thanks!

I wished you let them get to them finally having sex in the tent and describing it in detail! That would have been a great crescendo to the story!

Awwwwww maybe next time huh?

Thanks for writing!

Sweet, loving and very erotic. The sexual tension/love story combination worked very well. It was truly beautiful.

That was just a lovely story. Really, really good. Thank you for it. Jim

Real, erotic, and within the realm of reality.

Nice pace and flow for easy reading. Good enough grammar and syntax doesn't distract much, but spell-check fails with homonyms. I've read worse.

2 single people meet and the Eyes Of Texas awaits them. TK U MLJ LV NV

This is by far your best story yet.

I think romance is your best genre. Please keep writing.

even if they are total strangers, TK U MLJ LV NV

Your story flowed nicely like a warm honey over fresh bake bread. Enjoyable read. TY

Great story

Really a great romance story. Its a shame real life is so messed up.

there are more than 20 comments to this story.

need I tell you, I think you can easily work it out for yourself.

FIVE STARS!

I really enjoyed this fine Tale, TxRad. Nice buildup to a strong emotional and physical connection between two nice people who enjoyed a growing commitment and love.

5 stars! Dan (phd70).

Yep! That would be me. You do great work, sir. Absolutely excellent. You brought back some iPod the best memories of my life and some of the greatest dreams I have for my future. Thank you for writing such a warm tale.

Very good story!

a very romantic and hopeful story.

Great story and it is in my favorites. Tw ships in the night that find each other and rtrue love.iI really enjoyed reading it again 5 stars plus.

Have you thought about writing a sequil to this story and bring us up to date on them?

As far as leaving his asshole boss and not telling him GOOD FOR HIM.

Ron. Texas

cowboyridecc@yaho.com

love happens when you least expect it to.

It was a romance. Great ending. This is a story I would like another chapter. VERY nice writing skills fellow Texan.

Clean and simple love story excellent writing a good all around love story

R. M./ mcwhorter28445 @Gmail.com

Nice story. Try Caprock canyon state park......take a long lens, there's bison.

LRH@DFW

Loved the romance, a well written story, very descriptive. Thank you.

I've never had an adventure quite like this one, but I did enjoy your tale. Definitely worth Five Stars!

You make me believe in love again.

Had me jealous

wish I had I 30 yrs ago & didn't have to develop film . had a poliriod way bad when.

Thank you, enjoyed this a lot.

Always enjoy your writing.

I do NOT like older men younger women stories so never read them. I know older people need love too. She is a bit to old for the stories I like, but he is way older than any story I read. She is still in her sexual prime at 44, he is not even close to his. When she is ready to rock and roll he is ready to roll over and go to sleep. THAT'S a FACT! How would I improve this story? Make him 28 and her 34.

A very nice romantic story. I know he's older but so what; most of those mature stories are younger man, older woman. This was refreshing. Thought it could have been longer with more on the journey, but, hey, you're the writer with the skills I ain't got. Thanks and keep on writing.

Lovely story. Well written. Love the mischief, love and banter between the two. Keep more like this coming. Five stars.

I love this story!

Very nice, was every dream I wanted but never got, As the story says, life is like that. LOL,. That might have been anotherone. SOme get their simplests dreams fufilled, some never get any of theirs. But. there is always hope. Hope is like spring and renews every year, or day, or4 month.,

TxRad,

I just found your stories yesterday. This is the 4th in a row and 4th 5* rating. You write what I enjoy reading; well crafted good stories about real people in believable situations. Thanks for your work.

Nicebut ended too simply

gentle, slow, easy on the mind and easy to imagine and picture the couple. perfect ending

Can't say enough. Just read it!

I have been reading your stories and like what you write. This story is one of my favorites. Great job!!!!

TxRad,

I really like your stories but sometimes they are a little confusing. How many times was Jack married? Did one wife leave after six years and another die after more than twenty years of marriage? No complaints though. Five stars as usual...

Good story. I like the way it moved, not to fast not to slow. And, had a good ending.

Just wonderful ! 👍

I am constantly surprised at the number of talented writers that have not mastered the proper use of some of the most common words in the English language. Case in point is using 'to' instead of 'too', 'of' instead of 'off', the misuse of your, you're and yore, quite and quiet, there they're and their, and the list goes on. There is a good tutorial on the subject here on Lit that all of us should read once in a while. I'm certainly no master, and have no room to point my finger at others. What little knowledge I have is because of the dedication of my 1st through 6th grade teachers starting 67 years ago. Mrs. Bronch, Mrs. Pritchard and Mrs Molyneaux, I am forever in your debt.

Dear Mr Anonymous, how about throwing up a couple of your stories for people to look at before you complain about a story you are getting for free. If you want to pay to have the story edited, let me know.

TxRad:

Thanks you for a lovely Romance.

You slowly built two wonderful characters before out eyes and presented them with a very clever plot.

Your lead male give an exemplary description of how a real man helps a special woman grow even more special.

The Hoary Cleric

I have tears in my eyes after reading this tale. What a beautiful romantic story of two people whose lives are a mess, who meet and quickly find they are more than compatible. Forget "Anonymous". He pops up on many stories. The same bitches and references to his elementary teachers. The story is the point and yours are consistently off the chart wonderful. I wonder if this one is a little autobiographical. From your picture and bio I get the feeling that you are similar to The Teddy Bear. Hard to believe this story is totally fiction. ;-))

Slow and boring