by Quin
Pretty good story, interesting and with an original point of view. Some confusion between homonyms, eg, 'lead' - 'led,' 'to' - 'too.'
such depraved sluts that give in thru no fault of their own but of the devils doing. And how often a church clergy becomes the one actually making them live out their fantasies of guilt and adandonment, when being submissive while being topped and abused mentally and sexually. Religion makes such good sluts out of really sexual women. Dont believe this, read all the way back to ancient literature how women in order to protect thier chasity for marriage took anal sex, since it wasnt sex and they remained virgins. Eliminate religion and most of the wars in history go away, as does modern terrorism, and much of the mental anguish people put themselves in for being weak or evil.
Really loved that I hope their is going to be a follow up we need it.
another gem Quin love the build up in the story. can't wait to read the rest