by bethuk
Sex when you're not aroused is more uncomfortable than what the stories pretend, and the unwanted, unprotected sex is exactly how a woman feels. Scared, unpleasant and humiliating.
I recently had a non con story rejected because my main character didn't enjoy the experience, so how did this pass? Not a criticism of your story, just me whining :p
Even for non-con it was over-the-top bad. UGH!
@whackdoodle... well said! Mad brownie points on that comment.
I wonder if the boyfriend got any pay from this. Stupid pimp wantabee. What sucks is that she will talk to him again and find it exciting. She's going to go all dumb girl.
Get out of this relationship was my reaction. Promise you away bareback to a man known to sleep around! Without birth control! And what about STD? And no pleasure for you, just anxiety. This is abuse, not love. But I see from your biography that there will be more experiences. Will it get better? You write well.
Just imagine the state of a girl in this predicament.......I suppose there is always the morning after pill.
A nice mix of tne two stories combined. It didn't rush into anything which was nice. Hope to see her do more
Very descriptive writing and good flow of the story, sounds like an interesting situation to be in.....waiting for chapter 3 ;)
Test yourself for an STD and well it was nice reading that a woman didn't start acting like a complete slut after seeing a huge cock.
Bethuk
You have talent. So well done, the readers think it wasn't fiction...of course maybe it was. Love to read more from you.
Rape, which this was, is a downer for me. Could you write about a happier bit of shagging?
Chilley
You have a good voice. I was right there with you. It is too bad you had this experience and I hope you have found a nice guy who cares about you and you can have a mutually rewarding sex life.
I would love to read about how you find love and fulfillment once these two jerks are in your past.
Much love there are good guys out there.
Just wanted to say that I enjoyed your scenario. Thanks!
The story is well written, but the 2 guys are both really horrible men and she should have nothing more to do with either of them.
Hope this wasn't a true story, as have had to take plan B pill myself, and the long wait for results of STD tests.
Really well written story. Not super erotic or whatever, but extremely well done in terms of building a believable story about a pushy guy slowly wearing down an inexperienced girl into doing something she was uncomfortable with, with a guy who was happy to ignore her reluctance. 5/5
A nicely written story. I hope the story was fictional. And not true. Not all guys are scumbags.