All Comments on 'A Vacation To Remember'

Well told in such a natural way and with a strong feeling

of realism.

This author really knows how to write freaking hot stories. WOW keep them cuming , Coconut!!!

Not a big thing, just the motivation of Jill to go from, "I'd never" to "When in Rome." Suspending the disbelief that most women who would say "I'd never" would ever switch without significant incentive and time was too difficult in the context of this story. To follow that switch with blatant sexual action on a public beach is inconceivable. Clean it up and it can be a great story.