All Comments on 'A Valentine Murder'

I am unsure what to think. It was ridiculous, but fairly well done. The "waste" thing is a real problem and NOT erotic!

Within a few minutes Alan finds out that; 1) his partner is bi, 2) his wife is bi, 3)his wife has been cheating on him with a female co-worker,Janine, 4)Janine and his wife have been manipulating him and his partner, 5) everyone who participated in this hoax knows he is being fooled, and 6)Janine has exposed him and his wife to any STD's in his office.

His chance to bed his partner, which he could have done at any time, causes him to ignore all of the above, and jump into a poly-amorous relationship in which he is a bit player.

Please keep writing, but please help me maintain my 'willing suspension of disbelief'

A great little story, maybe a just a fantasy, but fun to read. With a wife going to all the trouble that she had, she should be satisfied that her desires came true. Now the only thing she needs to do is to keep the sexual excitement going between the three of them. Thanks for the good story....Rich

This was really wierd; sort of strange; but in the end, just another cheating slutty wife story... & a husband who tolerates it instead of getting a divorce and moving on. Ho Hum

Spineless weak husband, puts up with a cheating whore of a wife, like some other poster hinted, they should all die of aids.

I really think this story would have been better if cupid was real and ended up seducing Alan and Sarah. Then maybe he would tell his wife who would say that she was then with Jeanene and it would work out. I know that's not real life but I really liked the idea of cupid being real.

WHAT A PILE OF CRAP!

That story had so much potential, but.....

2 starrs

It's no mystery, this just plain sucked.