All Comments on 'A Valentines Day Treat to Remember'

If it hadn't been slightly riddled with simple grammatical errors, it would've been perfect. Nice story, otherwise.

Loved your story!Oh how love and passion can make a couple walking on air. Thank you for the entertainment!<P>PT

A very good read, loved the way you wrote about the BJ, it was very descriptive "Hot". Looking forward to reading more from you.

That would be a happy Valentine's Day for sure.

Agree with 26thNC.

Problems:

There is no dialog.

Lack of feelings being expressed.

Just what happened is not enough.

Not actually a Loving Wives tale.

Literotica's definition/description includes: "married exta-marital."

This was "married marital." Which is not a bad thing, just not in the right category.

Try

Erotic Coupling, or,

Romance (fits Valentine's Day).

Paul in Oklahoma

Now thats a fairly hot story.