by hardatitooo
Dude you seriously need an editor!! The story reads like it was written by a 5 year old.
A little self-editing and proof reading wouldn't hurt, but you still write a damn good story...Waiting for Part 2.
What you had was very well written, I would have like a bit more background on her and/or their relationship especially as he knew her as a teacher.
As with others, wish for you to continue. Thoroughly enjoyed it.
Certainly hope you'll continue this tale, after all Mrs Wren love her ass play so she needs a good anal shagging as well as the FFM fun hinted at!!
It was a pleasurable read but you have to watch out who you are having sex with. Was it Mrs. Wren or Mrs. Owen?
Yes, wright another chapter or two. Have her teach a lot of guys then have an orgy.
Hell yes...another chapter please...5 stars. This story would have really fit good in the 'Loving Wives' category since a 40 year old wife is not yet old. This story would have been just as good if not better if the wife had been 55 years old or even older.
A well told hot scene.
more build up would be OK but is not needed every time.
And YES ! Bring on the extra Chapters, We want them.
Ramjet
This Beginners Sex Story Taught by a Mature Woman is Very Well-Done! The Woman Teaching Each of Her Body Areas as They Go is Enlightening! Making Sure She is Satisfied and Telling Him to Listen to What Her Body and Hands and Words Say as They Go Toward Orgasm is Fun AND Educational! Thanks!