All Comments on 'A Valuable Lesson'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Dude you seriously need an editor!! The story reads like it was written by a 5 year old.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
encouragement

excellent. loved it. more please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great first attempt !

Yes , go for it ! Part 2 please .

littlewilly1littlewilly1over 8 years ago
Great work

Great first story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More Please...

A little self-editing and proof reading wouldn't hurt, but you still write a damn good story...Waiting for Part 2.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 8 years ago
Yes part 2 is needed

Please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Keep Going!

Nice start, FFM three way with a hot teen sounds good!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Very Good

What you had was very well written, I would have like a bit more background on her and/or their relationship especially as he knew her as a teacher.

WindySwimmingWindySwimmingover 8 years ago
Great Start!

As with others, wish for you to continue. Thoroughly enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Do keep Writing!!

Certainly hope you'll continue this tale, after all Mrs Wren love her ass play so she needs a good anal shagging as well as the FFM fun hinted at!!

Prolonged_Debut10Prolonged_Debut10over 8 years ago
Good first effort

It was a pleasurable read but you have to watch out who you are having sex with. Was it Mrs. Wren or Mrs. Owen?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Keep going

Very nice first effort. By all means, let's see a second chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Good Job

Well told. You should definitely write more.

86yohom86yohomover 8 years ago
Great start

Yes, wright another chapter or two. Have her teach a lot of guys then have an orgy.

kplusmckplusmcover 8 years ago
another chapter?

HELL YES AND SOON

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Bring it on!

Great start definitely needs to continue.

fr45fr45over 8 years ago
Hell yes...5*

Hell yes...another chapter please...5 stars. This story would have really fit good in the 'Loving Wives' category since a 40 year old wife is not yet old. This story would have been just as good if not better if the wife had been 55 years old or even older.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
5 Stars, from me !

A well told hot scene.

more build up would be OK but is not needed every time.

And YES ! Bring on the extra Chapters, We want them.

Ramjet

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Owen?

Who is Ms Owen?

spankfunforspankfunforalmost 6 years ago
Must Read for Young Men and Women!

This Beginners Sex Story Taught by a Mature Woman is Very Well-Done! The Woman Teaching Each of Her Body Areas as They Go is Enlightening! Making Sure She is Satisfied and Telling Him to Listen to What Her Body and Hands and Words Say as They Go Toward Orgasm is Fun AND Educational! Thanks!

chytownchytownabout 2 years ago

****Hot sex very entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Nicely done

Waiting for the next chapter

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