All Comments on 'A Vampire's Pet Ch. 03'

Omg I am DYING for more of this it's the best story I've ever read! I'm not joking you should publish this it's so good! I need to know what happens next please! I want him to have sex with her next chapter please!!

With this story is the chapters are too short xx

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrggggghhhhh.,.urmph. Mrew? No, no...or maybe yes, yes. I'm sure you've got something good hatching already.. But the bestiality sounds good (mentioned by anonymous below). If he truly wants her to emulate a cat, she can go meshuggah with this: he can't punish her for behaving like a cat would do during sex. Ouch.

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Hate were this is going. I liked the beginning were I thought he was her mate and their was a chance he would change but now that she is a broken cat that can't even talk there is nothing interesting that could happen.

I'm sure this is not the best story I've read on this site, but it does have potential, at least the 1st chapter did. I am not fond this how short each chapter is yet I do love your consistency. This is by far not a knock you down, your no good comment, cause I am actually enjoying your creativity. But like most I do hate her fight to regain her sanity was short lived. Maybe a chapter what happened to her in those 2 days would in lighten us on her submissiveness at such an early time in the story, unless it is all just a rues...lol. Please continue and try to dig a little deeper on everyone's emotions. Elaborate on his servant whose caring for her, and you mentioned family and friends...a little background would not hurt any. Just don't forget your fillers, all stories need background and fillers. Good luck on the remaining chapters and know I will be following and reading each one. 💋💋

Thank you for sharing.

I'm Curious to see where this goes, petplay can be a lot of fun to read and I'd love to read some non-con petplay.

I see that there is a fair amount of negativity in-regards to this story, I think the last chapter inparticular got too grim too quickly with the savage beating as punishment and we see another severe punishment here. As to how to solve that problem (if you consider it a problem that is) I'd probably say that giving us a better idea of the characters emotions may help as may longer chapters as currently the expossition feels somewhat rushed.

I LOVE pet play story's. Thank you for writing this, and I cannot wait for the next instalment!

I plan (if not next chpt, one after that) to do a background chapter on each character, fair warning, nothing "present day" will happen in that chapter. It may be boring, but, hey, all the confusion should be resolved. Ive got ALOT up my sleeves as of right now... so just, please hang in there. If you liked the beginning, you'll like where this is going, i promise!!!! (:

I happened to stumble across this story and I enjoy it immensely! Please keep writing; I look forward to more chapters in the future!

really like the story, I just hope the whole vampire thing is actually used and not just some cliche

wait, is this it?? the end of the story?

This is not all there is. I haven't added new stuff in a long time, I know. And I'm sorry. but there will be more added. Just be patient with me.