All Comments on 'A Very Sexy Night In'

Great story Wish I had some friends like that

I wish I had friends like that also... I'm female and that story definitely worked for me, if you get my drift ;)

thanks for the feedback glad you enjoyed it :) xx

That was definitely one of the hottest stories I have read here, please write the next chapter with Kirsty, Jack (and whoever else you want to keep in it.)

I must say, that was the most interesting read on here in a long time. The build up was well played and it was plain out just astounding in leading up to the sex.

Can't wait for Kristy and Jake to get a story and can't wait to see how much teasing you can do.

Very good - please continue and submit other stories - or just continue this one.

Loved the build-up to the sex. Great read. I'm pretty wet right now. Thank you.

That story is the best I have read in a long time. God im so wet. I hope you write more storys soon!

Your store was amazing. You did a great job building the story up at a good pace and the detail you put into the story was perfect. I hope you do more with this story!

I really enjoyed this story great story line can't wait to read about what Kristy does to Jack

I love how strong the women were in this story in getting what they wanted. Very hot. Very very hot. Loved the ass tonguing near the end. I only get there when I'm really on the edge then I love to lick around and push in.

I love games that have a very real sense of possibility. Great story great characters. One of my favorite on the site.

Outstanding! Filled with non-stop action! A 5+

Had to read right to the end and it was brilliant, worked for me ;o)

The word is 'wander' when you walk about a space. To 'wonder' is to think about.

Very arousing, though it was difficult to follow who was narrating as there was a lot of head-jumping. Seemed like it started off as Jack's story, but by the end, everyone's thoughts and feelings had been divulged only to go back to Jack's perspective. If he's the narrator, he can't know what anyone else is thinking or feeling, only what he can observe (see, hear, touch/taste) unless the other character(s) tell him.

Aside from a few a few misuses of words and misspellings, this is a great story.

The descriptions and dialogues are very good and the scenario seems very possible, though in my experience, there would always be some "Debbie Downer" trying to spoil the fun.

Well written and very enjoyable. I can't wait to read more of your work.

that was amazing, the perfect length for alone time edging. my god, woman. perfection. i'm straight, but you could totally whisper me a story anytime you wanted to. i even felt inspired to share it with my ex. i don't know why, i just knew he's love it. i hope his fiance does too. ouch. damn. why did i do that? i'm blaming literotica and YOU!

five smokin hot stars. and can't wait to read your other stories. <3

For a wonderful read. Just enough of a distraction from work while having a coffee. Now I have to let my hard-on subside before getting up!

From the beginning I could tell this was going to hold my interest and I was not disappointed.

That definitely deserves more than 5*!

I got a bit confused over the names and relationships, I thought Jack and Kirsty/Kristy were a couple because the story started out with them. Honestly it didn’t really have an overall negative impact.

Great story, thanks.

This was the exact type of story I was looking for tonight!