All Comments on 'A Very Special Lunch Break'

HI CK, Thank you for a great read. I enjoyed your story and the descriptions. I could feel their love and their passion.

Hope to see more. I would love to share thoughts.

Stu

Sweet story, but almost all your stories sound just alike. All the chicks run and all th dudes chase. You ARE so talented, maybe you can write something different. Every story is the same. Different looking characters...same story. The women all have the same thought process. I believe you are better than that.

I wish you had maybe posted with a username, so I could comment back. For the most part, you are right. I guess I didn't notice at first, but yes, I do seem to put the same types of characters together. Then again, I triumphed my first shot at writing the male perspective. That was basically my whole reason for posting this story. It was a personal test, and I passed.

Secondly, while I don't know if I am as good as you think I am, I do try. I can't help that I love the aggresive male / submissive female coupling; it's in my blood. I shall, in the future, seek some resources on writing different types of characters. I shall also attempt to amaze you at the same time. Thanks for your honesty.

CK_12

i LOVE your characters & the way you put us right in the middle of their love! 5 STARS!!!!

Thanks for a great read.

Always enjoy your stories. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.

Poignant - delightful. *****