All Comments on 'A View to a Thrill'

I loved it. Well written and liked how the characters and their actions were quite believable.

Well done.

Please continue this with Penny !!!!!

Very hot. Will there be a followup chapter involving the sister? I hope so.

Such a hot story. Loved Carol's evolution

can't wait for the 3 some and then the 4 some

Please don't leave Dad out of the mix... perhaps even with the neighbors?

But please don't do the cuckold thing. That ruins a story.

Loved it, and agreed with all the other commitments.

2 points, though. You eat at the dining table, not the dinning table. And weather is when it's raining, but you decide whether or not to do something

Boys just can't keep a secret, can they? If one guy is boinking his mom, he is going tell his buddy sooner or later. Good call! You deliver the goods while leaving opportunity for more! Hope Penny coming home is a indication of a sequel to cum! I love a clueless dad bumbling unaware about while his family descends into incestuous ecstasy!

A different premise, which keeps the story mildly refreshing, even with the grammatical errors. Maybe more, while still keeping dad in the dark. Nice job.

Well done! An instant favorite!

let penny have it too in part two....

Yeah, go for it. With your ability to spin a yarn a couple more chapters should be doable.

Very good. Looking forward reading pt.2

i really hope you make a part 2!!

Really enjoyed reading this story. Hoping you will continue it

I hope there will be some more to this story

thank you really enjoyed the build up

This story was a great read

By far, the best story that I have ever read!

Great read 👍🏼

This has to be a series! Fuck that was hot.

This needs to be ongoing.

I loved this story. Another great one by a great author. I love the descent into lust for the mother and I love all the close calls. I also love the accidental penetration and the teasing of them getting so close to fucking before they finally do. It keeps me on edge. This is going into my favorites.

This was an awesome start to what could be another incredible series.

I sure hope you continue this. So many possibilities. You kept me hard throughout the entire story. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Off to moms house I'll be going now

Hope there is more to come.

This story just screams out for a series. Maybe a neighborhood orgy. Hot build up to action without the grammatical mistakes to detract from the story. Only thing I would like to see is more of the internal processes and background of the characters.

This story deserves a sequel... it's not enough for your audience. We need to find out if Penny comes back and fucks Jimmy... Maybe the father stays away for a two week trip overseas (his plane crashes and all aboard are killed - hopeful thinking) Maybe Greg was aboard the flight too for a choir trip. Carol, Nancy and Penny in a fit of despondency decide to tie Jimmy down and use his body over and over and over again until his balls are shriveled up and they.... never mind. lol

Great story! Hope to read more!

A fourway is definitely in order. As a side piece, have sonny have a go at Dad's girlfriend. Plenty of potential for some hot,carnal mixing here. Mom, son,daughter(Penny) threeway sounds hot, culminating in a neighborhood orgy like the scene from The New Neighbors. Great writing. Hot!!

I think adding a grandmother to the mix would be good, too!

Can't wait to see where this going , foursome , family threesome ....

Long have I waited for a truly great scenario, something other than the same old same old. This I greatly enjoyed. Thanks again.

A new, inventive, and sexy way for mother/son lovin to start--by being voyeurs to mother/son lovin right across the street!

I couldn't favorite this fast enough!

Just wow! Thank you!

Great story line!! Hot incest action and voter action as well. A lot of people can relate to the neighbor thing!! I had to go jerk off while reading the s one!!

This is awesome, you must write more.

Get Penny back o the house

Oh yeah bring Penny back. Maybe the next door neighbors need to get in on this. MMMMM!

Penny !!

Excellent story but we need the sequel. Great stuff

At last another author who knows how to write and writes a very good story. Keep up the good work and thank you for your writing.

The old fart

Write what you want to write and don't let others influence what you write. You've already proven that you are an excellent writer and you know how to write a good story. Ignore the ones who try to influence you with what they want. Be your own master. You deserve that right.

and thank for an original idea. most of these stories follow patterns that are repeated over and over. it's refreshing to find a new one

Can't wait until he fills his slut sister's hot cunt full of cock

so far, look forward to the next chapter. Spying on the neighbor is an excellent device for moving the story along.

Some people, writer''s included, just have a fantastic knack for "thinking outside the box" such as great ideas, theme, plots for stories very unlike many that have been written. This story, so far, has all the elements of a great incest genre of a son and the seduction of his sexually neglected mother by his 'wham bam, thank you ma'am, a quickie and roll over to fall asleep father, Charles. Mother is so neglected, her wick is quick to burn at the slightest provocation of her female sexual libido!!

It appears this story might make some unfortunate and stroke-type turns, by turning into a sexual free-for-all. Let's hope it maintains some decorum, romantic kindness and respect between a mother and her son (and maybe her daughter, and Jimmy's, sister Penny). It does appear also that mother Carol could soon be estranged, and soon to divorce her husband. Mother and son could proceed with the inclusion of twenty-three year old daughter/ sister, Penny; it seems she might be moving back home, from her local college dorm, now that she's seen her brother's huge cock slithering into and out of her mother's pussy.

Greatly enjoyed your superb story --Well told, neatly paced, and really necessitating a sequel --one tat includes Carol and Jimmy, but Penny Nd Mrs. Miller, and Dad's young para-legal. after that you can go anywhere = with Jimmy and his friend doing each others mothers, and Penny's Girlfriends, and Nancy & Carol"s younger sisters. Good Luck, and Thanx

Good story, very similar to other story on here called Todd, fuck your mother

So. Good. Thank you!

Another really good rub from the author!

As good as this story could have been for me, I cannot bring myself to indulge to read it knowing that the author has a handle that includes three consequtive number sixes in a row. That is a demonic reference and should not be conjured in any form, even if humurously.

Holy crap. Amazingly hot. Mouth dry. Blood vessels expanded. 5 stars

Hot & fun filled yarn. Good bedtime read for an old bloke to drift off to sleep with.

Good job, it's not a 2-day-old shaved with stubble story! "He felt her tremble as he worked his mouth from one taut nipple to the other while running his hand down her abdomen until he felt the soft down of her pubic hair." 5 rating.

Finally one I believe could have been a little longer. Another page of hesitant build up would work ur writing is superb