All Comments on 'A View to a Thrill Ch. 01'

There's a lot more to this story -- I think there are several more chapters to add, after taking the time to set up, and then discard, the repressed wife. Swim? Naked? Is there another Nude Day Contest story in the offing, perhaps from her point of view?

this is a hot setup and there ought to be more. Best, Ken

Very hot story. Hard to think of anything to improve on.

... but written in a clear, distinct style that leaves no room for misconceptions. That's the kind of clarity that will make you popular in any writing. I write mystery novels and wish I could render your clean crisp style.

Keep up the fine work.

It's clear that the wife doesn't really like her husband and it should have been a red flag for him when she walked out with the "I'm looking for cock" bikini that she doesn't normally wear so she can go alone to the pool. So far she seems to be a cold heartless cunt.