All Comments on 'A View to a Thrill Ch. 02'

by blaster666

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FmypcktFmypcktover 7 years ago
A wonderful story is brewing

Very hot. Poor Jimmy is getting no rest

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Make it a series

Otherwise a lot of people will be disappointed. Love how you included Penny into this and the upcoming threesome makes drool!

5*!!!

No1holywoodNo1holywoodover 7 years ago

Waiting for the next episode

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

The excellent addition. It is logical to threesome with Nortons and possibly foursome. Carol is a pervert and after she could view a threesome she would expect something more. Possibly four or five-some. I am looking forward a continuation.

wheezertoowheezertooover 7 years ago
hot

Fantastic story. Keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Love it

Great story, fuckin' hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
awesome

Looks like you haven another series on your hands, great story with plenty of sex filled excapaids to go

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

continue this series please and soon. You have tons of area to go for this series. You could easily add at least 4 more big chapters to this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
☆☆☆☆☆ (5)

:-)

BusyAfternoonBusyAfternoonover 7 years ago
Hey blaster...

You are nowhere near finished with this story. We're looking for more.

Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Threesome

Such an erotic story, can't wait for chapter 3.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Now that is what I am talking about!

Finding a new quality mother/son story is truly one of the great thrills of life! And we get nynpho sis and the fucking mother and son next door in the perverted, but fuckliscuous mix! Yowza! The mind boggles where you are going to take this. But judging from your other work, it is going to be steamy and creamy in that fine Oedipal way!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Still a great story

You're doing great the way it's going. Don't listen to the people clamoring for more people to be added to the story. That will only degrade it. Too many people think the more people in a story makes it better but the opposite is true. The fewer the better. You're doing great the way it's going. So much better than the vast majority of the stories on this site.

The old fart

Archer45Archer45over 7 years ago
3rd chapter

Need more. Let me know when the next chapter is posted

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
You can't quit now

lets get Peny 479eand her mom together

Jbee1225Jbee1225over 7 years ago
No doubtedly my favorite story on this site

This story has made me more wet than any story on this site. It's well written, well organized, and I love the personalities of each character to the point with penny mounting Jimmy I was yelling "no, penny, no! That's rape!" And how it played out was absolutely amazing. Wonderful job XD

homerjayhomerjayover 7 years ago
good one

keep going, we can see more light in the tunnel

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
YOU HAVE MY INTEREST IN THIS STORY

A well laid pair of women seems to quick. Can a new path be chosen? Toss his salad!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Liked the first chapter, this one

seemed forced, like you were hurrying to get everyone to copulate. Take your time, dude, your stuff is good.

LanceinBermudaLanceinBermudaalmost 7 years ago
Welcome Back!!

Your faithfull fans have missed your erotic writings!! Another fantastic story ... which hopefully will continue for many more chapters! Fantastic characters and another very well written fucking HOT story!! Cheers Lance

scorge30scorge30over 6 years ago
More please

I read that you had no intention of continuing this story, but I hope that you reconsider and write more.

Turtle1952Turtle1952over 6 years ago
Ohh don't stop now

Please keep going, penny seems like a fun sister and then there is "lunch" with his best mate and mom.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great story and there’s still another part.

Not over complicated, great story flow.

5 stars!

Bill S.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 1 year ago

So fucking hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

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