All Comments on 'A View to Remember'

Nice beginning to the story ! Arousing and its nice for the woman to take charge :) Please write more, as you have so many possibilities here. Unplanned, sudden action from 2 people trying to move forward. Thank you :)

Thank you and please continue.

... you've written a story that doesn't destroy its own credibility within the first few sentences by trying to make out that the reader is one of the participants!!

Result?

A very good story, very well written!!

Keep on like this and you'll make an excellent writer!!