All Comments on 'A Visit to Daddy's Office'

by _alexandrina_

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Boring

As much as we all like punishing our daughters your story is trite and boring

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Major issue

You can't have the whole office hearing her getting a spanking but not getting fucked by her father. And no where in the real world can you spank your grown daughter for people

To hear at work. At least have gag her or bring someone in the office to join to make it plausible. The way you have it is just tok far fetched.

Bambi_DoeBambi_Doeabout 7 years ago

I agree so they hear the spanking and crying but not the moans or fucking. And being that its an place of business they'd probably would've called security for him beating her. It wasn't a bad story but I do agree with that one anon. The plot holes were massive so they distracted me.

decimusdecimusabout 7 years ago
Ignore the literary criticism....

This story is hot. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
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Thia didn't seem like an actual Father/Daughter relationship (despite it being in the incet category) but more of a DD/lg relationship. That would explain why nobody really reacted.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
I LOVED IT

I can't wait to hear what happens when Daddy gets home.

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