by DrWho
Much too quick, no plot, no sensual build-up, as well as some simple typos/spelling errors, not erotic in the least. I did read two of your stories hoping for something of interest, it didn't happen.
he has two weeks with her. fuck her in different places. get creative.
Do you really have to ask ? ;) Good story and there is 2 weeks of 'free time' left.