All Comments on 'A Visit to San Francisco'

by Nemarle

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kurtrellianskurtrelliansover 5 years ago

I did enjoy this story. It feels real to me, and reminds me of a few much enjoyed visits to a sex club with my female partner. As a man I did not get quite so much attention, but some. Sums up the experience nicely.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
that was hot

I like the way you made it flow, good author

prevackerprevackeralmost 4 years ago
subtle passion is so sexy

Many details in the story are such subtle HOT ideas- not so much what was done, but what the writer was going to do next, now that she had learned how much others wanted her to enjoy (her, his, their) sexual attentions

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I rather liked it. As my wife first attended a club like this without me it was nice to read a tale that could have filled in the gaps of what my own wife wouldn't reveal. Unlike the main character, I knew and had been trying to get my wife to go with me. So when her female friend asked her to go with her, my wife had my blessings.

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