All Comments on 'A Visit to the Doctor Ch. 02'

I am on the edge of my seat waiting to see the next chapter of this one!

OH, you are so very good. I suppose we will have to get an opinion from a woman on this, but your ability to convey their thoughts, at least as I would image them, is almost uncanny. But please ... Chapters one and two are almost exactly two years apart. Can we see Chapter 3 a little sooner.

SIZZLING slice of erotica... I was left breathless. Please don't wait so long before submitting Part Three!

this story blew my hair back...and, i read the first chapter as well...you are a very talented writer...HOT, HOT, HOT stuff...write more...write soon...please

Certainly one of the greatest lesbian/doctor themed stories I have ever read. But did you have to be so sadistic as to make us wait for so long for the second story?

Plz Plz Plz hurry up with the next story. Can't wait for that.

"This magic tongue snaked its way into my ass—swirling and twisting—a clapper swinging in a soft, wet bell—opening me completely"

mmostly, this is a triumphant achievement, a delicate story of rare felicity and passion, and wonder and childhoods, and new imaginings.

well done!

really good story.

Really excellent read - the emotions captured perfectly, the right level of detail, not too rushed. 5*