All Comments on 'A Visit to Yukiko's Place'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

try uzing spill chek

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Should the author submit this under

Non-erotic section?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
killed it fast

The author killed the story faster than the speed of light as soon as anal sex began. Where do all these brain dead authors come from, as anal sex isn't practiced by but an extremely few people, so using it means stories aren't even realistic.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Anal may not be my cup of tea but I suppose it's alright for some

But this story is not.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Naive

Naive writing style, no sense of anticipation or erotic buildup to events. Could have been a good story if more care had been taken.

AnonymessAnonymessover 11 years ago
Whoa what did I just read?!

This story does not belong in erotic couplings.

This stank nasty story doesn't even make sense. Her arse was so tight he could hardly enter but her pussy was tighter than her asshole??!

The whole story was just nasty and feral

DWornockDWornockover 11 years ago
anal intercourse

Therefore, 1*.

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