by suziesdad
That was actually really good. There where a couple of mistakes that I noticed, but i think it will defiantly be worth your while as well as that of your readers to continue this series with Lesley. It would be ashame not to let us meet mikes friends and find out what else is in store for Lesley. Good job
Please continue. I cannot wait to see what happens next. Friends you say... so worth coming back again and again... Great detail.