All Comments on 'A Vow Unsaid Ch. 02'

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SwifthawkSwifthawkabout 11 years ago
Another wonderful chapter!

Oh, how I hope you continue this series, I NEED to know how things turn out for these two! lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Awesome

Thanks for continuing this story. More please!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Historic novel for sure.

The age of fantastic attire. The beautifully colored bell shaped dresses floating across the big lawns. I hope your imaginary Confederate families are of the few that treated their servants acceptably. I love historic novel literature.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Love it.

I love this. Want more. Very curious about the story ahead. Beautifully written. 5 stars for sure.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
GREAT START

Great start on your writing career. The story is well told. While some may nit pick about minor errors (gasoline instead of kerosene) they're minor and easily corrected while proofing as you shown in Chapter 2.You got The Battle of Bull Run correct. I love historical lesbian or Bi novels! You got the fear of being caught right. Many authors write historical novels with attitudes which are modern. Kudos to you for not falling into that trap. Keep writing please . You have real talent. Thanks, I look forward to the next chapter. ChristieP

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Beautifully written

Very well done! I eagerly await the next chapter. Most definitely 5 stars!

dgowredgowreabout 11 years ago
One Down, One to Go

Terrible thing to say, but only Patrick remains. But even if he is killed, I cannot imagine how difficult it would have been for two women in those times. That road to Boston is looking better all the time.

biercebierceabout 11 years ago
Well written

I really enjoy your story. The scenes, the descriptions, everything. Thanks.

mab4664mab4664almost 11 years ago
Excellent

I have so enjoyed your story. I do hope you will continue with it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Keep writing!!

Need I say more?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
MOOOORE!!!!!

PLEASE ANOTHER CHAPTER!! I BEG YOU

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