All Comments on 'A Voyage into Night Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
An excellent vampire story.

A really excellent vampire story, well written with an excellent plot and with exquisite character development. It seems like Isobel is fanitizing that she is a vampire being so turned on by the dark woman killing Kira. I hope she gets her wish and the dark lady turns her instead of killing her. That way they could be companions for each other and hunt together. This is one of the better vampire stories I have read and it earned 5-STARS. You have 2 wonderful chapters under your belt and I will be looking for chapter 3 to see the fate of Isobel, turned or death. Retired Army NCO

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