All Comments on 'A Walk in the Park Ch. 01'

I like how you started the whole story....If you can create enough sweet tension between the two then that would be nice....

why do lawyers come off as pompus ass's even in stories?

Wow! I'm hooked! Great start and I look forward to your next installment.

I can't wait to read more chapters!!! PLEASE hurry with the next chapter!!!

A good first story, easy to read and very enjoyable. I look forward to reading the next chapter, and any other of your stories.

It was easy to read through this chapter with its excellent structure and grammar. Their conversation was also natural and flowed well. I'm interested to read about their first date to see if there are any sparks.

Interesting. Set on the east coast but a couple of words says English.

Boyd

Great story can not wait for next chapter.

Great story! (At least the start of one) Wish the professions were reversed though i.e. she was the lawyer and he was the teacher.

Great Start, but where is the rest??

Come on, please, where is the rest. I like your style of writing, it flows.

You have good feedback, people want more of your story, plus says you uploaded this story on this website in 2008, it's 2012 now

A promising start. Please continue.

Why not continue??

It's got great romantic potential

19pvc44

Where is the rest of the story

2008, time to finish this story.

Too bad you never completed this story!

4

Only problem with this chapter is that it ended too soon.

VERY promising start to a fairytale story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

After 15 years I guess there will be no chapter two. Pity. It was a decent start.

Well crafted intro. Teacher Cynthia gets to tell her tale next?

I will keep reading if you keep writing with this degree of audience awareness; deal?

Lovely start...

I see from the date the story was released that there will be no continuation. A good start.

shame it did not finish