All Comments on 'A Walk In The Woods'

Nice going. For an erotic short, a vignette, it was pretty sexy and I liked much of the description. My only real criticism is that it offered nothing new - the 'you' character did and said everything I expected. But I liked the 'convulse on my cock' moment just for its sheer physical rawness, amongst other bits. Keep up the good work!

So hot! 5 star! Great content as well as mechanics, structure, grammar, etc.

Can't wait to see more from you.

You are a scholar without a doubt. Sounds like a perfect afternoon. Awesome vivid descriptions. Hot!

This was amazing just like your PMs

VERY hot!

Hope you will add more Episodes

Saw you in Literotica threads. Hope you will return my posts.

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Sexy!! Cheers 🥂

Oh this is hot!!