All Comments on 'A Warm Night in the Southwest'

Most erotic! I liked the ending, the middle and the beginning.

Gene

I find stories written from the 'I' 'you' perspective very difficult to read and appreciate.

This grandfather of 4 says you are one great looking grandma! The story was well written, erotic and a great read. I'll have to check out your other stories soon. Keep up your fine work.

Who started these inane second person POV stories? Why is it used so much in erotica? It is extremely annoying and difficult to read.

How can the writer tell me, the reader, what I am doing or what I am feeling. It is stupid.

I don't even know what your story is about. I quit reading after the first paragraph where you had me looking out the bedroom window or something.

Mostly the "you" stories are by writers who can barely call themselves that. Your first paragraph shows you have the spelling and grammar and can obviously write. Now read something about point of view and stop this "you" crap.

Eric

great detail and belivable, hot sex but cheesey ending