All Comments on 'A Warm Summers Day'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Dialogue

This is the most stilted dialogue I have ever read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Hot memories

Great capture of the growing excitement of a first time. Very hot. But you could leave out the urine fetish part.

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