All Comments on 'A Warm Welcome'

by ohmygodnoway

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X S sexX S sexover 16 years ago
More

Really, really good. More please. Rarely read les stuff but after this, just might.

Your tag (or what ever it's called) ohmygodnoway is very eyecatching and interesting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
A great first story

You did a fantastic job of describing that moment when you both just know.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
well written

You described the sexual tension between the two wome n very well. Could almost feel their stomachs tightening and the blood rushing through their veins.....wait a minute, that's my reaction. Keep up the great work

Hayley18Hayley18over 6 years ago
Let Down

Great Sexy story, built me up, hoping for an intense climax only to end suddenly, I'm sorry I felt let down a little

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