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All Comments on 'A Week Away Ch. 00'

by errantide

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

nice start.... keep writing. do introduce the characters in the next chapter. who is Ashton? be waiting for next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

You write well, but no real indication as to what will occur. Not sufficiently enticing to continue reading

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