All Comments on 'A Week on the Lake Ch. 04'

Especially liked the development of the relationship between Will and Eva.

Hope there are more stories to come.

Thanks.

I really like how you took a character who was heart broken. Tossed him into a mix and now he has a new love life. I knew when Eva was blushing and stuff and wanting to be near him all the time they would end up together. You should continue on with Adventures of Will and Eva! :D

Good story until the guys stated sucking cock. I believe that belongs in the gay sex section.

The whole bonfire orgy felt a little ... I don't know if cheap is the right word. There were so many new names to learn without much association, and therefore significance. I find it far more rewarding when an emotional stimulus is felt by the reader over a particular coupling. In the case of the bonfire scene(s) I felt very little to none of that. Just saying. Otherwise the coupling of friends and all was terrific.

Perhaps as a heads-up for future readers you may want to warn about the male-on-male action. I noticed you put that at the front end of "Snowed In". Frankly, I enjoy stories with some experimental MMF action.

The entire series was very well done otherwise, and I look forward to reading more of your offerings. Not to ruin anything, but Snowed In was a very nice segue to the next round of Will & Eva's sexcapades

I actually feel the same way about the orgy in retrospect.

Adventures of Will and Eva will continue though. Thanks for your comment.

That was a lot of fucking.

5 stars and a fav! nothing better than a story with sex from beginning to end and with great characters all getting involved. and GREAT SEX!!! i just wish it had been a "Month" on the lake rather than a week!! fantastic!

Should have been 5 not 4 stars but my fat finger missed.

I loved the bonfire segment and was only disappointed that Kaylee didn't end up sucking and fucking her dad!

This is a great story. Loved the development aspects. Perhaps some insight into Wills choice of whom to fuck next and how. Example “man I can’t wait to jump on....”. Or “look at those nipples”.

bullshit fantasy too many people

Not nearly enough people, you dare call yourself dirty? Thanks for reading, shithead

What was the point of introducing Laura's call? It was introduced, shown to others, and then nothing developed. Could have been ignored and had no impact on the story.

Laura's texts made Will realize he was over her