All Comments on 'A Week with Cathy Ch. 05'

Why? Seriously why? This was an awesome series and you are making it less and less credible.

To Anonymous, just remember, this is a fantasy and believability often takes a back seat. I did not find this too far out of the realm of believability, as fas as amateur writing goes. This particular fantasyland has gotten pretty complex with all of the people involved, but, why not! The more the better.

I'm new to this site and I'm confused about the category change. This story has gone from I/T to EC, back to I/T and now E&V. Does Literotica.com change this, or the author? I find it a bit difficult to follow when searching by category when the chapters change.

One of the reviewers mentioned "... the more the better...". While that is true, the most important thing that I believe keeps us reader hooked is clarity of characters! You have so many characters with so little descriptions that they become just names with no connections. Rick, Steve, Marty, Susan, Missy etc. so many in this chapter alone that they all might have as well been strangers to each other and it wouldn't have made too much of a difference. Now, the reason I am even bothering to comment is because I see a lot of potential in this series. If I simply hated your stories, I would have just skipped you and wouldn't even have bothered to comment. I hope you take the criticism in the manner it was given and keep improving.

J. Jamie Dupane

Anonymous, categories depend on the particular chapter -- so Chapter 1 of a story can feature "Oral Sex," while Chapter 2 is about "Group Sex."

This chapter is not in keeping with the previous story very well. It is distracting to try to figure out relationships, motivations, or interest with these new characters. If voting was allowed on this chapter, I would probably give it a "3".

I have been enjoying this series a lot but don't really understand this installment. You have like a dozen plot lines going with the kids and hadn't spent 15 seconds on the parents til now. On top of that, this section didn't really go anywhere and ended on a discordant note. So my advice is stick to what's been working. You left Ch 4 kind of unresolved so this 90 degree turn seemed even stranger. I'd much rather see you go back and keep fleshing out your main storylines.

This chapter is really just a set-up for the final few (which is why I disabled "rating")

Chapter 6 should be live within hours.

Kids having fun, Parents bomb they own party, LOL, that was good!!!

This went everywhere