All Comments on 'A Weekend by the Lake Ch. 01'

So when did he enjoy the niece? I would enjoy reading that story.

I wanna hear about that niece.

instead of a weekend it was one night. I cannot complain much because I am not a writer but while the part I read was not bad it just ended and like Mr Reb said in his comment we need to see the Niece do her 'thang so we can get closure or at the least have the story meet the title. Are more pages coming? I will wait and watch.

wher eis the part abut the niece?

Hope you continue. She needs a good brotherly fucking.

Can't wait for chapter 2

No drugs!

He never did the niece and the bro's wife is either cheating (not my scene) or will turn into some kind of swapping and sharing thing which is even worse in this category. There is even a pretty clear gay subtext to the whole setup tossed in for good measure. The only thing this story doesn't actually get into is much of an incest angle.

I'm done. It's already off to a bad start. The only good thing was the physique of the women being curvy instead of the typical stacked slim supermodels guys mostly write about. Start over and keep it more simple and straight hopefully in a fresh submission.

He didn't sample the niece

when are you doing part 2??

more man its damm short it can be 2 pages at least

What a stupid waste of time. This is the dumbest story I seen here...