All Comments on 'A Weekend In The Caravan Ch. 03'

You really do need to have an editor look over your text: it is full of spelling (particularly homophones)and gramatical errors.

You need to learn how to handle speech - see the Literotica "Writer's Resources".

Sex between stepfather and stepson/daughter is not incest.

...in fact it's full of grammatical errors, not just 'gramatical' ones.

I liked this story,in fact I liked it a lot,brings back memories of a certain week in a caravan,I wont go into the gory details.The text does need a bit of attention,but not a lot.

I found this story very erotic,this site is called Literotica after all,this is not a site for english grammar competitions.There is nothing wrong with this submission,that a little effort could not put right.An Old Harveian [English Grammar School].

This story gets hotter each installment. Please keep it going. Hope it leads to the whole family in the open.