All Comments on 'A Weekend of Life Changing Incest'

In paragraph 4 it says the divorce was amicable, I meant to say the break up! Sorry!

I want a continuous story on this one

You really must continue this !

no mention of the pill

So what is your point almac?

No mention of life on other planets, or world poverty either!

I can’t mention everything to suit your rhetoric!

Write some stories so that others can see how perfect your work is!

The opinion of other writers on here is very welcome and important to me. Anonymous and non writers are meaningless.

Really enjoyed this and the faux par of the divorce/break up can be easily overlooked.

I do agree, though, this does deserve another chapter.

Thank you for the enjoyable story

This story clearly places the protagonist in the role of predator/sexual abuser. Regardless of their ages as you repeatedly point out the girls diminished capacity.

Even if entirely fantasy the fact that this trips your trigger is just sickening.