All Comments on 'A Welcome Distraction'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Fantastic. Please write more in this world.

I love these characters. More please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wow

This story and these characters are fantastic!

More! More! More!

nthusiasticnthusiasticabout 6 years ago
Unbelievably Amazing!

Intensely captivating. Instantly addicting. I do hope you will grace us with more of this story. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

I find myself confused about the two stories posted so far. There are some inconsistencies. Example, in A Welcome Distraction Chloe refers to Hoenir as guarding first her mother as midwife, then her sister, back & forth several times. Which is it or is it both? Is it a coincidence that your first two stories overlap? Are they different versions? In AWD, Mimir loves & is guarding Chloe while in your most recent posting, he loves & is guarding her mother.

Thank you for sharing your creativity.

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