All Comments on 'A Welcomed Guest Ch. 04'

Ah wait... Too much information in a one-liner? That surely is pretty flat

So cut it, please. "The Men" got the gift that every (fertile?) women who is looking at him want to get his seed - he screwed the beautyful next-door-teenage-Tina and then let him get blackmailed by the overweight neighbor mother of Tina? What?? This story got a lot of possible potential but is providing an whining washcloth instead of an gifted man. Hopefully it gets better, if not for punctuation.