All Comments on 'A Welcomed Guest Ch. 14'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
ok,ok...

This is a step up in quality from the last installment. On track again, very nice. Keep up the momentum!

RazzakelRazzakelover 3 years ago

Really hope Ephus keeps all of the other Goddesses as his wives!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
The use of adverbs

Smirk, sneer, are words that should not ever be used as much as they are used in literotica.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Seems that every character's mouth is "dropping open" or "hanging open" with alarming frequency!

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