All Comments on 'A Welders Tale Ch. 03'

Can't wait to read more

excuse the pun but i didnt see that twist coming.

I really enjoyed your first two chapters. This one just didn't seem to flow for me. Almost like you were rushing through it. To me it seems like a lot of secrets were not fully explained. Maybe they will become more clear in your next chapter.

I guess n a nutshell, the first two chapters I could feel David's character this one I couldn't.

Obviously you have a talent. Keep writing!

Keep it coming. Waiting for next great chapter. Thanks

This one went off the rails for me. His wife/mother has been cheating on him for years with Rachel and he just accepts it meekly? She cheats on his with his (not) daughter and he accepts it. The story apparently went on too long. You fell into the trap of making things more sensational and lost a good story.

Damn David is thick and indecisive and at times I wonder what the heck these women see in him